Japanese Style

Edit: CHANGED SOME COLORS. As you probably can see. And... fixed some stuff.
Better, worse? o:

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Why the FUCK is it always this way?
As soon as you want to draw something nice to someone, you can't, because nothing seems to work with you.
FML
I wonder why I'm so stressed over this picture anyway, I mean... I still have until the 14 september to draw it. Ah well.

This is... or WAS (as it seems atm) a birthday present for my dad. I wanted to draw a japanese dragon first cuz he's into them right now, but that idea fucked up BIG TIME, so I just went with the japanese style, which also went to hell.

Well at least I FINALLY drew Netami in a Yukata, the idea had been in my head for MONTHS.

Ok, so now, PLEASE COMMENT, or leave a critique or whatever. Please point out everything you think looks weird or wrong or fail or whatever, so I have time to fix it before I actually decide to give it to him.
It's always easier to see mistakes if you haven't drawn the pic yourself, and I will probably only see them in a couple of days.