Edit: Decided to remove the painting in the BG, it was just... distracting imo xD But here's that version anyway for those who wonder : [link]
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I just wanted to draw him again, sooo... I did.
I'm really trying to try out new things with every picture I make now, which... Takes a lot of time and maybe doesn't show but yeah, hopefully this will help me impove in the end xD Fightooo
ok, so to start with i love this paint of yours. I think the colours used were well chosen and the effects makes it even better. I love the way you used the colours in the background very simple and dark which turns the scene even more amazing. I really think that you have done a great job in this paint. Although i think you should use a lighter colour for the pants.
But overall the work itself is good, the way you have used your technique in this paint is just way too awesome. Already added this paint to my favorite, great job, well done.
Ok… I’ll start on what was good about this picture.... The way you drew the hands that holds the candles made it look very creepy and I just loved it. The tiny footprints were a nice touch as well. The hat’s crooked position made me the overall picture look more… maddening. The eyes… had gigantic bags underneath so it enhanced the overall hypnotic feel about it; also the fact that the colors of the eyes were reversed made me love the overall theme of the picture. The little details like the spiders and spider webs on the hands were a nice touch. The ghost steam coming from the teacup was very cute, they made it seem as if there was more meaning that could be implied to the picture than meets the eye. The wrinkled table cloth, tiny apple, ripped curtains, and wallpaper were excellently done as well. Things you could improve… just to let you know… I have a slight obsession with hands, so it might just be me. The hand that was holding the spider was a bit too crooked (bulging out to the left side near the fingers). Or it could’ve been correctly placed and been just the thumb and the palm that was the problem. See, you placed the thumb too low, and that other bulge that was on the right side of the hand was really… annoying? The dark area on the palms were too dark, it made the palm area seem deeper than it actually is. The whole effect of the right hand makes it seem as if the thumb is placed in the middle of the hand, although that could be what you were trying to do… I wouldn’t know. I understand that the long and narrow hands are your style so I won’t be telling you that it is wrong, because every artist has their own style and this is yours. If you have troubles with anatomy then try using your own hands as a model to see how the hand(s) basically look in that position. Now we go on to the left hand. The only thing I’d like to point out is the thumb. If you use your hand and make a cupping gesture you’ll notice that the joint on your thumb doesn’t cave in. I hope I didn’t sound too harsh about that ^.^”. And also, the ending of the thumb (where it meets the sleeve) ends a bit… awkwardly… (it ends with a triangle lump right before the hand enters the sleeve). Ok, I just have to say… I LOVE your work. I’ve always loved dark themed pictures/ stories/ songs and I just got to say that you combine the dark side with a hint of madness perfectly in all (99%) of your pictures. Looking at one of your pictures make me see everything else in a different light so keep up the great work!
I love it, all of it, I just think you could have put a little more detail into the hat. Stick some of his sewing pins in there, the 10/6 sign, but I love it over all.
I think the colours used were well chosen and the effects makes it even better.
I love the way you used the colours in the background very simple and dark which turns the scene even more amazing.
I really think that you have done a great job in this paint.
Although i think you should use a lighter colour for the pants.
But overall the work itself is good, the way you have used your technique in this paint is just way too awesome.
Already added this paint to my favorite, great job, well done.
The way you drew the hands that holds the candles made it look very creepy and I just loved it. The tiny footprints were a nice touch as well. The hat’s crooked position made me the overall picture look more… maddening. The eyes… had gigantic bags underneath so it enhanced the overall hypnotic feel about it; also the fact that the colors of the eyes were reversed made me love the overall theme of the picture. The little details like the spiders and spider webs on the hands were a nice touch. The ghost steam coming from the teacup was very cute, they made it seem as if there was more meaning that could be implied to the picture than meets the eye. The wrinkled table cloth, tiny apple, ripped curtains, and wallpaper were excellently done as well.
Things you could improve… just to let you know… I have a slight obsession with hands, so it might just be me. The hand that was holding the spider was a bit too crooked (bulging out to the left side near the fingers). Or it could’ve been correctly placed and been just the thumb and the palm that was the problem. See, you placed the thumb too low, and that other bulge that was on the right side of the hand was really… annoying? The dark area on the palms were too dark, it made the palm area seem deeper than it actually is. The whole effect of the right hand makes it seem as if the thumb is placed in the middle of the hand, although that could be what you were trying to do… I wouldn’t know. I understand that the long and narrow hands are your style so I won’t be telling you that it is wrong, because every artist has their own style and this is yours. If you have troubles with anatomy then try using your own hands as a model to see how the hand(s) basically look in that position.
Now we go on to the left hand. The only thing I’d like to point out is the thumb. If you use your hand and make a cupping gesture you’ll notice that the joint on your thumb doesn’t cave in. I hope I didn’t sound too harsh about that ^.^”. And also, the ending of the thumb (where it meets the sleeve) ends a bit… awkwardly… (it ends with a triangle lump right before the hand enters the sleeve).
Ok, I just have to say… I LOVE your work. I’ve always loved dark themed pictures/ stories/ songs and I just got to say that you combine the dark side with a hint of madness perfectly in all (99%) of your pictures. Looking at one of your pictures make me see everything else in a different light so keep up the great work!
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